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The Royal and Ancient

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PLOT: Dr Jorlisha is the new dentist in town, Garrison and Imagine are instantly suspicious of her, everyone just carries on regardless. Dr Jorlisha sees these bracelets, she has one herself but needs all 3 to rule this world, and unlock the special powers of that world. She already rules the underworld. She needs to place all 3 bracelets into a rock at the same time to gain control of this world. She had a sister who had all 3 bracelets handed down to her from her mother (Garrison’s grandmother).  Her sister realising the type type of person Jorlisha was turning into gave 2 of the bracelets to her twin children (Imagine & Garry) and sadly split adopted them out separately to strangers (in the middle of the night as it’s raining).  Dr Jorlisha tracks down her sister and throws her into the underworld where she is frozen and imprisoned in a chamber.  By chance Garrison and Imagine happen to end up living next to eachother. Dr Jorlisha must complete the spell by (certain date – which happens to be the twin’s birthday) to make it work otherwise Garrison and Imagine’s mum will go free. The bracelets must be destroyed in some certain fashion.

The Continuation of our Narrative Plan

SETTING:

THIS WORLD:

Perkyville Village – Popn. 877

Name of Garry’s School: PeeVee Primary   Mascot: Peevee Peacocks

Garry’s Street: Gleeful Road, Oak Trees, Very clean footpaths
Garry’s House: 73 Gleeful Road, Creamy coloured wooden villa, single story, garden with a pond out the front with fish, nice walnut tree with a tyre swing hanging from it, brick bbq, 2 car garage, solar powered, bright red door,

Dr Jorlisha Corvello’s house: Bill Peet House, Two storied,  Dark grey, Partly falling-down, desperate need of a paint, keep out sign on the door,     

Dr Jorlisha’s Dentistry: White building, with a large tooth on top that a mechanical toothbrush constantly brushes.  Ignore your teeth and they’ll go away – Mrs Glee (Old town dentist's motto)

Some tortures are physical, And some are mental, But the one that is both, Is dental - Dr Jorlisha

OTHER WORLD:

Plot? Dr Jorlisha is the new dentist in town.

STORY STARTER

It just happened to be the day Garry started feeling an ache in his tooth.

The Beginning of our Narrative

CHARACTERS

GOOD:

Main: 

Name: Garrison Vincente (Garry, GV)

Physical Description: Blonde, Blue Eyes, Light Skin,

Short, Ski-Jump Nose, Thin Lips, Round Ears, Male,

Who farted quizzical look on his face, Gold Bracelet

Character Description: Calm, Kind, Quiet, Tentative,

Shy, Friendly

Name: Imagine Walters (Ginny)

Physical Description: Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, Light Pink

Skin, Shoulder Length Hair, Slightly Pointy Nose, Female,

Thin Lips, Shiny Teeth, Bored Expression, Gold Bracelet

Character Description: Subtlety Funny, Smart, Clever, Friendly

Relationship: Next-door neighbours.

BAD:

Name: Dr Jorlisha Corvello (White Witch)

Physical Description: Long Fiery Red Hair, Long Fingernails, Sharp Nose,

Crooked Pale Scar (No-one knows where she got it from), Green glaring eyes,

Rust Coloured Teeth, Evil Stare, Limps, Cackling Laugh, Ice Cold Skin,

Character Description: Unpleasant, Unnecessarily mean, Laughs at inappropriate

times, she’s despicable, hates children,   

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